One aspect of Highwaypersons: Debts and Duties on which I have had little feedback is the language. In any historical novel this is an issue to be considered. I tried to make it modern enough to be easily readable, whilst avoiding anything that would be too gratingly modern, such as ‘awesome’, ‘iconic’ or ‘intentional’. I would welcome your thoughts on whether I have got the right balance. There is still time for me to make some changes to Book II, The King’s Justice before I finish it.
Any other comments would also be welcome.